A habit I had to break

Last time it was the first story's phrasing habit, a way of saying what a thing was not before saying what it was, leaned on more than I had noticed. Once I had a proper way of catching it, I ran it across every story, and found the same habit sitting quietly in the second, third and fourth as well. All of it has been reworked now, the same way as before: same meaning, put more plainly.

While I was in there I also went back through a batch of choices in the first and fourth stories that read more like a menu label than something she would actually say, and gave them the same texture as the choices around them. And I checked the codex entries too, since I realised I had never actually looked. They came through clean.

Small release, same reason as always: once you notice a habit in one place, you go looking for it everywhere else.